If I return

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just let me go

not because I stopped loving
but because love
should never have to beg
for a place to breathe

release my name
from the grip of your silence

untie the knots
we kept calling forever

if I return
let it be as rain
remembered
never held against the sky

and if I don’t
let the empty space
be proof
that something real
once stood there

34 thoughts on “If I return”

  11. Wow! I so loved this, Jennifer!!! Such an impressive presentation and on how things should work upon a need to end a relationship and to forgive, forget, let go and move on!!!! Beautifully done!! I so loved these lines:”untie the knotswe kept calling forever”When it’s needed it’s the best thing to do to “gain peace and move on”.This seems to be calling out for an audio recording???? Test it out for yourself? I think you would love it!!! It’s so perfectly set up to be a very emotional message that is hard to say but desperately needed to be spoken.Bellissimo, Jennifer, Bellissimo!!Chuck 🙂 xoxo

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