read me
the way a poem is written
without hurry
without trying to force beauty
where it already exists
learn the pauses
as carefully as the words
let silence have its own language
and let every touch arrive
like a line that knows
exactly where it belongs
leave pieces of yourself
between the verses
and I’ll leave pieces of myself
between the spaces
and when morning finds us
there will be no final stanza
only two hearts
still reading each other
as though love
was never meant to end
only to be written
again and again
Such an amazingly beautiful poem. Just like the author! π€
Braden π€ Thank you! You’re so awesome!
Youβre welcome!! π€π€π€π€π€
It’s actually what you wrote. In once word Awesome. Every sentence become silent live need to imagination. Although I am not so a good commentary may be I didn’t or haven’t perfect language of description about your writing so asking my apologies if you find me Idiot type.Thanks with best regards.
Thank you so much; I appreciate your comment!
Beautiful, Jennifer.
Thank you, Michael.
Perfect Jennifer β€οΈ
Thank you, Maggie β€οΈ
My pleasure always Jennifer π₯°
This poem is truly lovely, perhaps my favourite of all the ones you’ve written (that I’ve been able to read). Thank you for sharing this gem with us. pp
What a kind thing to say. I appreciate you so much β€οΈ
Wonderful poem – eloquently written.
Thank you, Chris!
That was an amazing poem 9/10. But also 10/10
Some high numbers there, thanks!
Wow! What an Awesome Love poem!!!! So Beautifully Penned Jennifer!!!
After you read this slowly out loud you might want to consider this as a candidate for an Audio recording???? Hmm? Maybe???
Chuck πβ¨πππΉ
Thank you so very much, Chuck! I may be turning them all into audios; we’ll see!
Oh My! Be Still My Heart!!!! Wow! That would be so Awesome!!!! Not just for WordPress but it would be Fantastic to have them up on YouTube.com too?????
Please, Please do it!!!
Chuck ππβ¨ππππΉ
Amazing poetry
Thank you!
You’re welcome, I enjoy your poems π
You’re so kind
Thank you π