I wrote you a letter
in fading verse
measured by time
shaped into poetry
I began with your name
careful and bright
and it stayed
time moved through the lines
but didn’t take them
it only made them gentler
each word
a falling star
brief and brilliant
leaving light behind
a kind of poetry
that doesn’t end
just shifts
into quieter forms
because love like this
will live in ink
in every line it touched
in every word it became
so if this reaches you
half-light half-dream
know it is whole
sincerely
someone
still watching
the sky
fill
with you
Beautiful, Jennifer. “Love like this/will live in ink”
Thank you so much, Michael!
Oh my. Such a tapestry has been woven here.
The symbolism of the fading/falling stars…
The living in ink…
The love matched by another in the beauty of the sky…
This love seems so anointed…
I know it to be the kind of love that never ends…sincerely.
Beautiful work, CC. It’s a joy to see you inspired. Love looks good on you.
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Wow, what a beautiful comment from you (like all of them) Thank you for this. This right here is what inspires me. I hope your day is as beautiful as you are.
This one felt like you, but yet different at the same time if that makes sense? And I absolutely loved it! And the narrative flow I felt from it! Round of applause for yourself incoming! 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻
Thank you! I appreciate you so much!
WOW!!! This is beautiful.
“sincerely
someone
still watching
the sky
fill
with you”
gave me so many feelings. You write beautifully!
Thank you, Jacque. How are YOU doing today? Feeling any better?
I’m feeling better today. I said goodbye yesterday, for good. I am in the process of writing about it and I haven’t cried today. Progress 😃 thank you for asking 💕
Progress. My offer still stands 💕 Try and keep a smile on your lovely face!
Thank you 😊 Definitely will take you up on that offer soon. Thank YOU for the smile 😊
Of course 😊
❤️❤️
Love you girl ❤️
Love you too Jennifer ❤️🥰
Jennifer, you write so beautifully! “sincerely someone still watching the sky fill with you”, stunningly expressed, Jennifer!
Thank you so very much, what a kind comment!
This is a gorgeous and heartfelt poem, Jennifer! Thank you, my dear friend ❤️😊
Thank you, Tyler. Always so lovely to see you ❤️😊
Gorgeous piece. Fine imagery here.
Thank you so much, Chris!
Thought-provoking piece, Jen
Thank you, Hazel
My pleasure!
So beautiful, Jennifer. 💓🌺
Thank you, lovely friend
❤️❤️So welcome.