within a dream
of a dream
I dream of you
behind closed eyes
and in the darkest
of darkness
I find you there
and confess one by one
the depths of my love
visible and bare
peeling back
layer by layer
everything I am
everything I use to be
and I am holding on so tighty
to what’s left of time
because once this dream is over
what will be left
of us
The Creative Chic
The Creative Chic 
Love the cadence here, the rhythm of the repeated words. Really lovely!
Thanks, beautiful!
I adore this.
I adore YOU and your sweet comments!
Gorgeous 😍
~David
Thank you, David ❤️
LOVED This!!! Your first 3 lines were so awesome! Taking us softly
“within a dream
of a dream
I dream of you”
You and your words have such magical powers, Sweet Poet!
😊💖💕🌹
Thank you so much, dear poet 😊💖
It’s all a dream… an angle I can understand. I like this a lot.
yes, all a dream…. I’m glad you liked it.
Of course 😁
🙂
A very unique, interesting, well written poem. You’re really good at writing all types of love poems. Another favourite ❤️
I love your kind words and your loving friendship ❤️