goodbye
a dance of shadows
the ones of you and I
an intricate ballet
in the depths of night
each step we take
is filled with hesitation
as we move apart
leaving behind little pieces
of what used to be
it’s the silence that follows
that will forever be engraved
into this broken heart
The silence! Oh how this resonates with me. Well written
And with me too, the silence says so much, doesn’t it? Thank you so much.
Awesome!!! Bellissimo, My Dear, Bellissimo!! 😊💕🌹🌹
Thank you, Chuck 😊💕 you’re so awesome!
You’re too Sweet, Dear Poetess! Loved the ending with the “Silence”!! 😊💕🌹
Oh this is so heart-wrenching Jen. Really powerful and sad.
Thank you, sweet friend. I suppose at times love and life can be like that.
That last stanza… ooof! Right in my heart. <\3 Beautifully written! ❤️
awww, thank you, Samantha.