and here we are
once again
completely naked
bare down to our souls
and in this moment
forgetting every scar
that we wear
inside these layers
where you and I
are free
bending to become one
and our bones
are no longer
our own
The Creative Chic
and here we are
once again
completely naked
bare down to our souls
and in this moment
forgetting every scar
that we wear
inside these layers
where you and I
are free
bending to become one
and our bones
are no longer
our own
The Creative Chic 
“our bones are no longer our own” , what a fantastic view on two people being so close they almost become one! Your poetry is always so beautiful Jennifer, and sometimes so erotic, at least in my mind anyway. I hope you are having a fantastic day 💕
Hey Brian! Thank you so much for your sweet comment! I try to have a nice balance in what I write. I’m pleased you enjoy it! Have a beautiful day lovely friend ❤
Your balance in your writing works and I enjoy all you write Jennifer. Thanks for sharing your words my lovely friend 🤗
You’re so sweet and kind, Brian. Thank you so much again. I appreciate you being here on this journey with me ❤
This is such a beautiful piece, Jenn; one of your best, although it is difficult to choose a favourite one when they are all so good. I love those last few lines –
‘… where you and I
are free
bending to become one
and our bones
are no longer
our own.’
Much love to you, Jenn Xx 💓
Wow, Ellie! Thank you so much. It means so much to me that you love my poetry. I can’t thank you enough for your sweet words and friendship. Sending you lots of love, Ellie 💖❤😘🌹💕🌸
Wow. The lines “bare down to our souls” and “our bones
are no longer
our own” are really good. They are beautiful and romantic.
Thank you so very much Bridgette, I appreciate your sweet words.
Really loved this – especially these lines – “completely naked
bare down to our souls
and in this moment
forgetting every scar
that we wear
inside these layers”!
You captured the sweetest moment ever – when two souls can be stripped naked and share and bond despite the scars and baggage we carry. Bellissimo, My Dear Bellissimo!
😊💖💕🌹
Thank you, dear poet, thank you so much!
My pleasure, SP!! 😊💖🌹
You never seize to amaze me with your wordplay and massive talent. Keep that pen busy. 😊
And, you never seize to amaze me with your incredibly kind comments! So great to see you here again dear poet ❤
Lovely words. This poem is beautiful and have lots of meaning behind it. Love it❤️❤️❤️❤️
Thank you, dear friend! I hope you’ve been well. Sending you lots of love ❤️❤️