15 thoughts on “Inside these layers

  1. “our bones are no longer our own” , what a fantastic view on two people being so close they almost become one! Your poetry is always so beautiful Jennifer, and sometimes so erotic, at least in my mind anyway. I hope you are having a fantastic day 💕

  2. This is such a beautiful piece, Jenn; one of your best, although it is difficult to choose a favourite one when they are all so good. I love those last few lines –

    ‘… where you and I
    are free
    bending to become one
    and our bones
    are no longer
    our own.’

    Much love to you, Jenn Xx 💓

    • Wow, Ellie! Thank you so much. It means so much to me that you love my poetry. I can’t thank you enough for your sweet words and friendship. Sending you lots of love, Ellie 💖❤😘🌹💕🌸

  3. Really loved this – especially these lines – “completely naked
    bare down to our souls
    and in this moment
    forgetting every scar
    that we wear
    inside these layers”!

    You captured the sweetest moment ever – when two souls can be stripped naked and share and bond despite the scars and baggage we carry. Bellissimo, My Dear Bellissimo!

  4. Lovely words. This poem is beautiful and have lots of meaning behind it. Love it❤️❤️❤️❤️

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