we used to be
a language no one else spoke
half-finished sentences
and knowing glances
that stitched the silence shut
we used to be
hands finding hands in the dark
like it was instinct
like the night was only a curtain
and not a distance
back then
laughter lived easy in our mouths
and the future felt small enough
to hold between us
something we could fold
and tuck into a back pocket
now memory does the touching
and I trace the outline
of who we were
like a scar that doesn’t ache
but never disappears
we used to be fire
without thinking of ash
Beautiful, Jennifer. The last lines are fantastic.
Thank you so much, Michael
💙 You’re welcome!
💙
Those last lines are brilliant!
Thank you so much!
Beautiful as always Jennifer ❤️
Thank you sweet Maggie ❤️
Jennifer ❤️ you are very welcome.
What a great ending. Well done!
Hey! Thank you so much! I hope you’re well!
I loved the way you developed this from Once to Back Then to Now!! So Beautifully done, Jennifer!!! Last two lines were great!!!
Bellissimo, Jennifer, Bellissimo!!!!
Chuck 😁✨💖💕🌹
Chuck! Thank you so much!
😁✨💕🌹
Those last lines are so gorgeous and heartbreaking at the same time.
Thank you so much girl, lovely to see you!
You too ❤️
Superb piece. Heartfelt and touching.
Thank you!
My pleasure.
A scar that doesn’t ache but doesn’t disappear 💔. Felt that!
Yeah I know 💔
Lovely piece!
Thank you!
You’re welcome!