sometimes I think
there’s something eternal
in the way your heartbeat moves
not loud like thunder
but more like a soft wind
brushing through the forgotten corners
of the cosmos
a rhythm older than language
older even than the first sigh
that split silence from sound
your chest rises like the tide
and I swear the stars lean in
just to feel the shift
the dust of dreams
the quiet particles left behind
by every hope you never spoke aloud
seems to lift as if your pulse
were the voice of gravity itself
and I want to press my ear
to that space just above your ribs
not to listen for answers
but for the hush between each beat
the place where the universe
waits to be reminded
that it is still becoming
something beautiful
The Creative Chic
The Creative Chic 
❤ you’ve managed to catch a moment of infinity and show us the vast universe within it. beautiful piece Jennifer 🙂 Mike
What a beautiful comment ❤️ thank you, Michael, for being so lovely.
I don’t think I have enough words to describe how beautiful I found this. It just flows and makes the reader part of its world.
I’m glad you’re part of it ❤️ thank you so much
Beautiful piece, Jennifer. 💙
Thank you so much 💙
“and I swear the stars lean in
just to feel the shift”
Such a beautiful line ❤️💫🌟
Thank you, love ❤️
❤️
I agree so much with the other comments, it hardly leaves me any room, words wise, … and it’s not often I’m lost for words. So in a way, that’s my comment, CC, … so emotive and beautifully done. .💫
Thank you for your beautiful comment ❤️ it means so much to me.
Your writing is exquisite Jennifer 💕
Thank you, sweet Maggie ❤️
You are so welcome Jennifer ❤️
Have a lovely weekend.
You too my friend. Any plans?
Thank you Jennifer
No plans my friend .
Will probably read or try 😉
Woww
Thank you!
Oh my!!! So loved this!! Bellissimo, My Dear, Bellissimo!!!! I loved the soft and gentle feel of your words and they so wonderfully described this experience!
Especially, loved these lines:
the dust of dreams
the quiet particles left behind
by every hope you never spoke aloud
Awesome!!!
Hope you have a great weekend, Sweet Poet!!!
Chuck
😁😘💖💕🌹
Awww thank you dear Poet. I appreciate your kind and lovely words! Did you get my email? (I replied to yours) Have a wonderful weekend too!
My pleasure to read your words and posts and to share the well deserved comments with You!!!
I got the one you sent May 18, thought I answered but sent another one just now. If you have sent one since then would you be so kind as to resend it as I would love to hear from you, Sweet Lady!!!!!
Chuck 😁💕💕🌹
I can’t with you. You make me feel all the things. Beautiful.
I just love you, Nicole. Souls like yours is why I write. You inspire me.
The beauty in your heart is always breathtaking and so calming. It’s that type of love that soothes any chaos lurking in the soul. You’re but like that soft wind too… For me it’s unforgotten in the forgotten corners of the cosmos. I appreciate you not more than you know. Because you already know! 💞🌹❤️🙂
Gosh, you’re so awesome! Thank you so much for your love and kindness, it means so much to me! I appreciate you too 💞🌹❤️🙂