you were a season of light
in my days
a beautiful interlude
where everything seemed to pause
in its perfect place
the world felt softer with you
each moment brighter
like we were two notes
in a song
that only we could hear
and though time moves on
I will always carry the warmth of you
my most beautiful chapter
lovely
Thank you, love β€οΈ
may you find yet another beautiful chapter and may it be a novel within your novel! π Mike
“A novel within my novel” I love that, Mike. Thank you so much. I hope you’re well today.
This had such a deep meaning for me, I have a sad story about my first love sadly that made me let go when I didnβt want too
I can relate to you as well. Life has its own way of working out for us at times.
Romantic!
Thank you!
WOW!!! I so love, love this!!! I think you need to add this to one of your very best!!!! You have so wonderfully captured the feeling of precious memories, moments and the emotions that Sweet Love brings to the heart and soul even after so many years have passed. You have so accurately expressed how the magic transcends time by just remembering. Your words are like diamonds on a strand that joins together into the most perfect necklace! Bellissimo, CC, Bellissimo!!
Magnificent!
Chuck ππππππΉ
Wow, what a wonderful comment. I can’t thank you enough for the support you give me, it’s beyond what I ever expected. From the bottom of my heart, thank you.
Well, You and your words deserve the praise so much!!! Honestly, it is one of the very best poems I’ve ever read! Instantly, reaching out and touching one’s heart and soul!! Maybe one of the best you have written – at least a contender? LOL! Hope you are doing well and have a great weekend planned!
Chuck πππππΉ
Thank you, this is one of my favorites, I must admit! I’m well and I hope you are too! Sending love from Florida to Texas!
I think you should send this around to some publishers, Maybe Spillwords and others, Maybe Cosmopolitan?
You’re too kind!
No not even close!!! It’s a Masterpiece!!! ππππΉ
So beautiful, this is great!
Thank you so much, love!
You’r welcome!