it’s like the sun
catching the ocean at dawn
just a brief glint of warmth
where I thought only shadows would linger
in a crowded world
where moments drift like passing ships
there’s this thought of you
anchored quietly in my mind
it’s where you exist
just between each breath
and where I hope you’ll stay
long after the last one
As a sailor I felt this deep. I spent many sunrises and sunsets topside observing the sun break the horizon to dance on the white capped waves. While I was deep in thought of special people at home.
I can imagine how special that was for you
Imagine the whole sky turning red while the yellow sun spreads itself across the ocean while the horizon is a silhouette causing the ships to dart past like loose shadows. It was very special. 🙂 you write so gracefully, thank you.
Such a beautiful image you paint. Thank you for the incredibly sweet comment
Awesome
Thank you so much!
Wow! That’s impactful.
Thank you!
Well worded and phrased…
I am so sorry for the late reply, you were in my spam mail. Ugh! Thank you so much for the kind comment!
No worries.
do I tell you enough how I love your writing?
Oh, Nicole, you are so sweet and kind to me. I’m beyond grateful to even know you.