parts of her still live
within that house
where stale smoke
still lingers in every corner
like a hazy memory
those thin walls
conceal all her secrets
from the prying eyes
of the world
old dirty floorboards
hold all her tears
that she counts
one by one
inside the grooves
that they live in
it’s the weight
of a thousand burdens
that keep her chained there
and all she can do now
is close her eyes
and remember
she doesn’t live there anymore
Touching piece!
Thank you, Noah 🤗
Dark. Beautiful.
Thank you, beautiful ❤
Felt this Jennifer .
Wonderful writing 👌🥰
Thank you, Maggie 🤗🥰💕
My pleasure 💕💕
Heartfelt and melancholy.
Thank you so much, David
Beautiful❤
Thank you so much!
Very emotional and beautiful ❤️
Thank you sweet friend ❤️
So beautiful!
Thank you, beautiful!
You’re so welcome!
Such a moving and compelling piece! Beautiful. 🤍
Thank you again, so much 🤍
Somber, well done.
Thank you so much
Very powerful last lines.
Thank you, Bridgette!
“The weight of a thousand burdens” awesome line, awesome title. Great job.
Thank you so very much!
Wow