you and I
are just time
in a bottle
slowly slipping through
the passage
of this space
until we are
just grains of sand
quietly settled
into the universe
intertwined
of flesh and bone
we are timelessly
etched together
for all of eternity
you and I
are just time
in a bottle
slowly slipping through
the passage
of this space
until we are
just grains of sand
quietly settled
into the universe
intertwined
of flesh and bone
we are timelessly
etched together
for all of eternity
Wow! So Awesome!! Love the title and the ending lines are heavenly!
Loverly!! 😊😍💕🌹
Thank you so much dear friend! I hope you’re doing well and having a lovely day 💗
Beautiful, Jenn. I love the lines, “just grains of sand quietly settled
into the universe.” I can really picture this. I love the idea of time in a bottle, too. Charming poem. Xx 🌷💗🌷💗
Oh Ellie, thank you beautiful. That is probably my favorite line too. Incredible how you can run across a picture and the words just come flowing out, like this did for me. I appreciate your kind words. I hope you’re well and having a lovely day so far! Much love to you ❤
What a lovely poem!
Thank you so much Bridgette! I hope you’re well, it’s so lovely to see you here!